Broken Glass

Andy, try to look critically at the image. You have tried to include everything in your frame but the frame itself is very disbalanced. YOu named the pic "Broken glass", but without that name rare people would notice that they are exist in the frame - since the glass is not accentuated in any way. And honestly, by thumbnail I thought that there is some hot yaoi in progress - left boy's hand is superimposed to right boy private parts, he is about to touch THERE, right ? Also, huge part of the pic is non-sharp body of the lerft guy, which sorta gets in the way. I looked over your pics in the account and it seems in general you're good, so decided that some opinion would help